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“Echo of Boy” by Darlene Young

Updated: Sep 24

My son hunches into the storm in his oversized coat

to collect fast offerings, a two-hour route

because the other mother’s sons stay in when it’s cold.

He is mine.

His wrists


out-hang his sleeves. His hair

squirms out of his well-slicked part, and he is mine. He’s out there

in the snow and I can’t settle. Thirteen years old; thirteen,

the way he slides a little to the right of us on the Sunday pew,

like someone has hit “tab” on the keyboard, though still

he’ll let me pull him back to drape my arm around

those slumping shoulders.

Shadow of boy.


It’s snowing and he is fine out there. He’s fine. At home

he sprawls on the couch behind those heavy eyes. Outline

of boy. Echo of boy. I tell it to him straight: “The reward

for showing up,” I say, “is that you’re the first one they call

next time. Find a way to be proud of that.” He looks

away. Should I apologize for this burden of duty I’ve bred

into him, for the fact that from here on out

he’ll never be able to leave a ward party

without putting away chairs? Welcome

to Mormon guilt, my son. Welcome to the wilderness.

Sometimes a suit is a front bumper, silver plating, deadweight.

Sometimes it is wings.


Those heavy-lidded eyes. Let there be a man

behind there. The still-narrow shoulders, crooked

tie. Does he slump to parenthesize the space

he’ll leave when he’s gone? Look

forward, son. Look forward,

mother. On the horizon

in the chalky dusk:

contrail of boy.

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